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Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

0 posted 2001-01-16 11:41 PM

Not my best but something that has more meaning then will ever be know.. to bad I cant show it.

A stranger at my side
albeit drakness umbrella me
he clutches me in his arms
and authentic grace and love I see.

And through the dungens hell
I behold the angels sing
for I am enclosed in veritable paridise
when you are beside me

And so I am compelled to thank God for giving
you to me. For momentarily we are not
strangers but friends we shall forever be.

To do anyting LESS then your BEST is to SACRIFICE the GIFT!!!

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-01-16 11:50 PM

Indeed, perhaps the most touching thing that I have ever read before in my life.
What an excellent expression of emotion, it is good to know that you have found someone to remain at your side. ~_^
I hope that you and this -stranger- never lose touch.
-Allan

Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-01-17 05:34 AM

Angel: Marvellous piece.

Its always great to find someone that special that you can say will be a friend forever. Nice display of emotion. Beautiful.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentra

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-01-17 01:09 PM

Wonderful job here. I liked this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

4 posted 2001-01-17 02:15 PM

Allan,
Yes, It is wonderful to know someone is at yourside.

Anonymousfemale,

Thank you for your comment, that was very much appreciated.

Thanks dopey

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2001-01-17 02:17 PM

great poem. That feeling is one of the best there is. You are very lucky!
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

6 posted 2001-01-17 02:42 PM

Angel, that was a beautiful thought put into words just as beautifully. Great poem as always Angel.

>¶ØÊ†<

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-01-18 09:17 AM

I'm glad this person is giving you hope.
Beautiful sentiments here Amanda
keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2001-01-19 10:05 AM

Very well said here, this poem is great

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

9 posted 2001-01-19 10:12 AM

ahhh....very sweet.
loved the last two lines

keep writing....

Salma

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