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branden726
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0 posted 2001-01-16 09:40 PM


I got this thing in the mail,
Its, wow, a form to college,
I signed up for this info,
I want to off to college someday,
But theres this thing about what if i dont make it,
So I sent away one of my poems,
To this place the call Knox,
A college down south,
Not really just south of me,
In a place they call indy for indiana,
What a beautiful name,
Im scared,
They reply and im told to send more,
They want to evaluate my poems and see how i write,
My topics are heart felt they say,
I sit here at night and wonder why,
I am the one who gets so lucky.

© Copyright 2001 Branden Jacobs - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-01-16 09:45 PM


Wow, congratulations.  That's great news, and welcome back.

[This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 01-16-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-01-16 09:46 PM


Brandon,
Wow!! Great poem and knox is such a wonderful place isnt it? Well at least i love it there. Anyway wonderful poem keep posting.



[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-16-2001).]

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-01-17 06:10 AM


Wow Branden ... WONDERFUL news! That's great to hear ... good luck, and keep us posted!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-17-2001).]

branden726
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4 posted 2001-01-17 06:46 AM


Thank you and yes knox is a great place and i cant wait till i go there you see i still have a long way ahead of me im only a freshman in highschool but its good to know that i already will be excepted in that on paticular school. thank guys

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"



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5 posted 2001-01-17 06:50 AM


Great to see you got into it Branden. Congratulations.  

~AF~

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Christopher Fry

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6 posted 2001-01-17 05:13 PM


Yeah, I've heard really good things about Knox's creative writing major.  And it's nice to see you back

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7 posted 2001-01-17 06:33 PM


Nice one branden!
Yea...i've never put my stuff in any contests or anything like that. I'm not up for that yet. The only people who see my poems are YOU guys and maybe a random kid or two from school when I feel like I need some feedback.
So yea........but I wish you luck pal!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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