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Angel in Flight
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0 posted 2001-01-16 06:09 PM


How I had gotten my pen name!


When I was young I coveted to fly
betwixt the stars beyond the sky,
to a domicile exclusively angels soar high.
Exceeding the rainbow to never land
where merely I may be.
A locality in my my mothers lillaby that she would sing to me.
To which the light embraced you and would
clench you oh so tight
where your friends would be alongside of you
and assist you at that moment you fight.
When I was young I desired to fly,
in contrast momentarily I truly do
consequently I am an angel in flight
now proclaim!!!!!What are you?

I used to write this name on all of my papers I had to turn in after my mother left me.When she left she told me I will forever been her little Angel, but now I only have to learn to use my wings and fly. Tamma thank you for this challange it has made me remember something i had forgotten about. And it is a wonderul memmory for me to remember about my mother. Thank you


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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-01-16 06:15 PM


Hey, who knew we all had such fascinating stories to go with our names?  I have yet to see a challenge that DOESN'T result in us all knowing one another so much better!
As for the last line, "who are you?"  Go and read my answer to the challenge and find out!  ~_^ hehehe
Great poem to go along with the story!  My gratitude goes to Tamma, for the third time!
It's always nice to unravel just a bit more of the mystery of Amanda...
-Allan

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2 posted 2001-01-16 06:19 PM


LoL @ allan of riverwood. Seems like we both have a wonderful place we can go to in our dreams it is to bad you all grew out of it though. I think you should all get together and take one last trip might be more magical then it ever was before. Let your imagination run wild and hey you might even learn something you never knew was there
~Amanda~

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3 posted 2001-01-16 07:04 PM


Nice one here.......*flies with you*


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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4 posted 2001-01-17 05:52 AM


Angel: This was such a good idea. It really made me think about where the hell anonymousfemale came from...heh  

Good piece.

~AF~

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Christopher Fry

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5 posted 2001-01-17 07:39 PM


Heh...when i started this...i didnt expect anyone to try my lil challenge   hehehe

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6 posted 2001-01-18 08:25 PM


Oh, this is so cool, you did a really good job of telling us about your screen name.  Great poem

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