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mikeykrazy
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since 2000-12-20
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0 posted 2001-01-16 05:56 PM


i know that i havent posted for a while but here is a new one.


I'm sitting here in the night
the only living thing out
the cracking of the building are giving me a fright
as the trees dance about

the heavy clook of scilence is eveywhere
and along with the mask of dark
and the wind is silently blowing through my hair
in the distance the dogs bark

a car zooms by putting riffles through the clook
and just as quickly dissapears into the night
the scilence just sits and lengers
as a plane glides in the sky like a kite

and just as all things
this comes to an end
but please don't cry
for you will always be my friend


this poem is for my midnight firend.  me ans her go out at night and just hang out.  but she is moving away so i wrote this for her


thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

© Copyright 2001 Matt - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-01-16 06:00 PM


WOW... this is a very touching tribute to a dear friend.  It's nice to share something as special as midnight walks with somebody.  I have no friends with whom I have specific, routine things like this.
I hope you and she keep in touch!
-Allan

Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 381

2 posted 2001-01-16 06:44 PM


WONDERFUL!!! I believe everyone should read this so up you go *Bump. I also have a "midnight friend" They are truly the best and will never be forgotten by any of us. I know that you guys will forever stay intouch on matter how far the distance between. That is one of the greatest things about friends like this. There are always there till the end. ~Amanda~
Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-01-16 06:54 PM


Nice one pal. Me likes
Wonderful tribute.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
4 posted 2001-01-17 07:01 AM


nice message to a friend.. very kind.
Keep posting bro.

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2001-01-17 09:33 PM


Nice job with this one, keep posting them

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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