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Allan of Riverwood (tamma's idea)
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg 
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What lies hidden within my father that only his closest know? two things lie hidden his decency and his middle name... i try to adopt one, so i adopted the other this name is Allan What lies hidden within my mind? a world in which we once played a world of our own creation to where I escaped with only my friends but nobody goes here anymore, save for me we named this place, it was a river of dreams, and we were simply floating wood, being carried away we foolish children called this land Riverwood... this land still exists but it is hard to find... and i can guide you, if you like (yes, this is the story behind my pen name. i know it's pretty in-depth, but it's all the truth! Riverwood was a fantasy land that me and a few of my friends invented in our preteens, where we played. Everyone "grew out" of this fantasy life, but I sometimes feel like I am still there, alone. This is where I get my pen name. Thanks for the idea, Tamma!) Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Allan, That is a wonderful story i love it so much. You said you can take us there if we want. Then I ask of you this please do. Tell us more about this riverwood. I would like to know it sounds like a wonderful place. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
all this time, i actually thought that was your real name guess i was wrong, what's new? at least now we understand your username I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey I like that story a lot! Wow....nice one Allan.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice story and nice job of writing it  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Wow, that's pretty cool. makes me wish that I had an interesting story behind my nick. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
 Sounds like a place I'd like to be.What an interesting story behind the name. It sounds like a peaceful place of escape. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I never knew that you had such an interesting user name. I wish I did! Anyway, this poem is really good. Those childhood places are always special to us, whether we want to admit it or not, and I'm glad that it lives on in your mind and in this wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I never knew you had such an interesting story behind yur user name!! Also, nice pic! I aint got a scanner, so ya all's are never gonna see who I am. So sad too. Anyways, how old are you? You don't look very old, but from the way you 'talk' to all of us and the way you write, I never'd be able to tell. Okay, I'm gonna shut up now. BTW, I e mailed you like you said I could. And perhaps I'll write about my user name. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Interesting Allan! Very cool.  Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm sixteen. Don't I look very old?  |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i like it beaucoup mon ami, c'etait tres intersent. je vous felicite! merci pour ca Regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Haha... thanks. This poem sucks. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
...Yep. ~Carly Many miles behind my eyelashes, there always seems to be |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
hey allan...that was way cool..i wish i could do that.. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. we get to see a picture! Heh.. very interesting, Allan... I like this a lot. Nicely done. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
*cries* this poem really humiliates me... please everyone could you let it sink? please? it breaks my heart to see it back up so often. *cries some more*  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
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