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UNC STAR
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0 posted 2001-01-16 12:49 PM


Sometimes I sit alone in room and look around
Sometimes I ask when will my love come around
I feel deep emotions as I sit on my bed
Trying to figure out what's going on in my head
I just can't sit and wait for my princess to arrive
I have to stuggle and fight to keep this love alive
Why do you girl make me feel this way
It goes through my mind each and everyday
As this I look to the Lord and I pray give me a girl that's sexy and sweet
so when she is tired I will rub her feet
Let her be brave and smart so that she will know what's in my heart. Amen




What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

© Copyright 2001 Jamie - All Rights Reserved
GirlsBestFriend
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1 posted 2001-01-16 01:24 AM


this is sweet! good luck!

~lotsa luv


"Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world"

UNC STAR
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2 posted 2001-01-16 03:56 PM


Thanks for the encouragement.

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-01-16 05:36 PM


Well this was nice. Very sweet unc. Hope it all comes true.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-01-16 05:51 PM


ditto to DD.  Hope it all turns out alright.

Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.


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5 posted 2001-01-17 04:38 PM


Hey, I haven't seen you around in a while.  Good job on this poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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