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Fly (a short poem for Angel in Flight)
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Fly (a short poem for Angel in Flight) |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Fly... Fly into the heavens of night Claim your spot amongst the stars... Life's beauty will lead you to the light Fly... Fly past the skies and even higher Your candle holds passion's love... Life is composed by that of heaven's choir So fly... Fly, even if you can't fly anymore The heart has an eternal flame you know Life, after this, shall fail you no more Fly... A little something for you to think of Angel  We in Passions are family too you know As I've said Passions is not only "a family of friends" It's more like "friends within a family" I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so very beautiful Acire! You've captured such an enchanting and inspirational mood in this piece, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Acrie, Thank you ....i just thought of something sorry. Anyway, Thank you acrie no matter what even if my wings fail me and i feel like i can not get up and go once more i promise for you i will always fly. Fly into the heavens or to the sky beyond. For you I'll do anything and if i must... I'll try to fly. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Kit --- thanks Angel in Flight --- good for you I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ain't acire a sweety pie?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Dopes Dopes Dopes  Hey, is that your hand on my lap Dopes?  Get it off  lol j/k Dopes I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Acire, this was truly great. Not only inspirational for Angel in Flight, but just what Child of the Stars needed to read.... ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job on this, I don't really know what else to say "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
A good poem to a great poet. Well done, well done... **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
thanks guys, but join me in praying that Angel in Flight does follow what the poem truly means I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This was awesome! I espacially like the last stanza, it was very uplifting AWESOME job! |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is a beautiful poem! i loved it thanks for the great read!! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Sorry I missed this one. Don't ask me how but it is possible when you live with me.  A very sweet poem for a Angel, Acire. Nice. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
This is really beautiful!!  Fly, even if you can't fly anymoreThe heart has an eternal flame you know Truly inspirational. Great job on this one, keep postin, k??? Much love, Priscilla How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Beautiful and inspirational. Always thoughtful is you my friend. Thanks for sharing and most of all, for opening yout heart to those who need it the most. Best wishes *Jess* "Tell me why you cry" |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
sweet poem acire..very inspirational i'd imagine for Angel..and yes lets hope she follows the message..great uplifting work on this one "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
this is great acire. really needed to hear it right now...even if it was written awhile back. *hugs* library it goes. tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
ditto what Tiff said... I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Aww that's sweet Acire Bel |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hey Cutie I like this very much |
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Meggie1986 Junior Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 41California |
This is really beautiful and inspiring. I will be sure to look for more of your poems. Great job!! *One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
inspring beautiful poem acire ...i truly loved it to be honest...very nice feeling this poem gave me ...i hope to see more...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!...this was so beautiful!!!....really really really sweet...good work acire...im fast becoming a fan..  ..AGPFAGP????...hells yeah!!!!
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