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Kit McCallum
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0 posted 2001-01-15 06:50 AM


March 12, 1963


Sickly from day one
Doctors battle endlessly
Incubator bound

~*~

Fight on little one
Mom and dad are so close by
Hang in there baby


Sorry for the sad slant Allan,
Guess a little fighter was created that day ...
I'm still here, and one of the oldies now, LOL!  

© Copyright 2001 Kit McCallum - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-01-15 10:47 AM


I for one am glad you hung on, Kit!  
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2 posted 2001-01-15 01:13 PM


Two!! You spoiled us!! Great job on these I might add...glad I read them!

~JDR

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3 posted 2001-01-15 05:54 PM


great job Ms. Moderator  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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4 posted 2001-01-16 01:57 PM


Wonderful job on this one Ms. kit...but very very sad.

Good to see yer alive and kickin, and still looking mighty beautiful at age 19.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-01-16 05:02 PM


Good job on these, I'm glad you made it through those fights.

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6 posted 2001-01-17 06:54 PM


Great Job here kit,
and i ditto lakewalker
sure am happy you made it through.
It is so astonishing some of the
storys we have gotten about our
births dont you think?
~Amanda~

To do anyting LESS then your BEST is to SACRIFICE the GIFT!!!

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7 posted 2001-01-17 06:58 PM


Whoa, thanks for putting this up, Amanda...
I missed it.  Sorry, Kit!
Yeah, it's quite the story, but i'm glad you made it through!  Otherwise who would remove all our offensive posts?  lol
^_^  Thanks for answering my challenge.
-Allan

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