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Elizabeth
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0 posted 2001-01-14 11:17 PM


Summer's just begun
Life had just begun for me
We'll see what it holds

I haven't posted in here before, but I wanted to do a birthday senryu after reading all of yours. Thanks for the challenge, Allan! (but I won't say how old I am!   )

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Morouxshi San
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1 posted 2001-01-14 11:23 PM


nobody will ask you your age Elizabeth.
dont worry bout it.

but if you want to tell us, we wont object nor divulge this information in other boards, yet we reserve the right to link back to the post that has it.  


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

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2 posted 2001-01-14 11:32 PM


lol @ San  
Great job on this Elizabeth.  I enjoyed it.

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

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3 posted 2001-01-14 11:37 PM


Very nice.

so you're 19 eh?



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-01-15 01:29 AM


Ask a lady her age?  I wouldn't dream of it.
You should all be ashamed.
As for the challenge, the CHALLENGE was really Jeremy's idea.  I just went with it.
Nicely done, Liz.

Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.


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5 posted 2001-01-15 06:39 AM


Hi Elizabeth ... great to see you here! Challenge well met my friend, nicely done (now about that age thing, lol)!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Elizabeth
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6 posted 2001-01-15 11:55 AM


LOL, couldn't help but laugh at San's reply! Actually I was joking when I said I wouldn't say how old I was. Dopey was fairly close, I am 18 and will be 19 this summer. Thanks for all the replies, everyone, you made me feel so welcome.  
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7 posted 2001-01-15 01:19 PM


nice job concealing the info.. i liked this one a lot too!

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

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8 posted 2001-01-16 04:58 PM


Great job on the poem, I like it

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