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Goddess_of_Love
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0 posted 2001-01-14 12:29 PM


Reach Out For Me!

When everything really gets tough
And you feel you've had enough,
Reach out for me
and the truth will set you free.

If everything else is down
and you feel like you're about to drown,
Reach out for me
And let the truth set you free.

When you're really lonely
and feel there's one only
That can let you be who you need to be,
Reach out for me and be free.

© Copyright 2001 Goddess_of_Love - All Rights Reserved
Angel in Flight
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1 posted 2001-01-14 12:31 PM


WOW!!!! This is sooooo insperational for me anyway. Thank you so much for posting this i believe it will help me a very lot.

Poet on Acid
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2 posted 2001-01-14 12:32 PM


Wow. Thats a nice change from the death and destruction and morbidity that floats around on this forum so much. great first post, I hope to see alot more too.

>¶Øʆ<

LoveBug
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3 posted 2001-01-14 12:32 PM


Welcome to Passions!
I'm so glad that you've decided to come here. This is a wonderful first post. Friendship is a glorious treasure, and you describe it so well. Thanks for posting!

PS-check your e-mail

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2001-01-14 03:19 PM


This was great! I liked it!
Welcome to passions!
Keep your hands, feet, and tongues inside at all times. Enjoy your stay and if you need any non-alcoholic beverage, please do not hesistate to ask.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Melster
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5 posted 2001-01-14 07:52 PM


Welcome to Passions... This was a brilliant first post...  I look forward to seeing more...

Melz!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

Alwye
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6 posted 2001-01-14 10:05 PM


Welcome To Passions!  This is a very sweet and kind first post.  Well written, I hope you'll enjoy yourself here!  

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
7 posted 2001-01-15 11:53 AM


Very nice poem, describes how I feel toward all my friends quite well. And welcome to passions, I do hope you enjoy your stay in our little family. Now, if you'll excuse me I need to go find some cold medicine...

*wonders off towards the medicine cabinent cursing getting sick the day before finals start*

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.


jeremydraul
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8 posted 2001-01-15 01:18 PM


Welcome...
This was very inspirational and I loved it a lot... I hope to hear from you really soon.

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Angel in Flight
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9 posted 2001-01-15 01:21 PM


LoL @ Dragon I'll ditto that last comment.
Lakewalker
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10 posted 2001-01-16 06:42 PM


Welcome to Passions
Nice job on your first post here, I hope you post more for us to read!  And about the cold thing, I was feeling so bad that I went to bed early.  I got like 11 hours of sleep, on a school night, can you imagine, 11 hours!  


"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Jenn Cirrincione
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11 posted 2001-01-16 07:34 PM


Hey, this is really sweet. It's rare to find a person who's so willing to be a good friend!! (Welcome to Passions!!)
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


Allan Riverwood
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12 posted 2001-01-16 07:38 PM


GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT FIRST POST!!!
What an excellent way to begin your time in this forum!
Wow, what an excellent poem!  I completely love it, you sound like a great person!
Hope to see more of you!
-Allan

Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.


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