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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
“Slipping Away” Tomorrow, tomorrow Bearing more sorrow Today, today Creeping away Next year this year Just brings more fear This week last week Just always so weak >¶Øʆ< |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
WOW!!! I like this alot and feel this way very often. This is one of my fav. so far from you. Keep posting please this is wonderful. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
oOo, I like this. It's got a nice scheme to it... err, i think that's what it is... ugh, need more sleep, stupid sister.. (/tangent) "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
hey thanx, I've been writin some rather shabby excuses for poetry lately so I decided to start posting some of my earlier stuff. I'm glad you like it >¶Øʆ< |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one poet......i liked the style. I absolutely love your expiramentation with styles.......wonderful job.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Such few words yet each oozing with meaning and emotions. I feel ya hun...great poem |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
yeah, your styles rock bro. great job on the meter. ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Another hit. Keep them up, my friend. |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
thankz everyone I'm glad my 'experiments' with writing aren't totally screwed up >¶Øʆ< |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
YES!!! different but very effective i like this a lot keep them coming I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, this one is really good, thanks for poting it. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
bump... >¶Øʆ< |
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