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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
wonders why I'm like this everyone seems so happy to be them I'm not happy who I am I feel like I'm worthless to this world because no one understands me it drives me crazy the only person who understands is myself I look around again people have a good life I just sit around cause it's to cold outside it's not fair being who I am I've found out your real friends care about you your not so good friends go don't care about you your hurt because they no longer care But you have many nice friends once I found them they care about me the fake ones say they do but really don't My real friends call me my not so good friends don't call me my real friends they are good friends I once had a friend Dave but one day our friendship went down the river it's not coming back Dave was never a friend he was my boyfriend but then became my ex boyfriend now we aren't friends Min |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice poem. in some moments i thought that it was missing some commas or something but i wont worry you with that  the theme brings me back to my comment on just skipping the friend part with your partners. its been done too many times and heartbreak after heartbreak it normally doesnt work. if it was a true story i hope it all werks out for you. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Ski, I have read some of your other poems and i am starting to believe this is a very very very hard thing for you to get through, but please always remember you are not alone i am very much like you as so many others. Someone once asked me if i ever looked at the blue part of the screen on top where it says " A family of friends" And that is exactly who we are. We are there for you if in need of us and most of us know where you are coming from since most of us have been there to. Never give up and let your heart guide you. Also remember where you came from it got you this far, never forget your past it will help you along your life's journey, and no matter what dont forget your friends will help you find your way. if you need to talk feel free to e-mail me i'll be there for you. |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
ouch, that kinda tore through my heart. But just remember that there is nothing wrong with being you, no one can be you better than you, there are things that you can do that no one else could come close to doing like you, like this wonderful poem for example, just think about the things that set you apart from them and just remember that your special just because you are you and they're not. and as for your b/f believe it or not there are others out there. If it didn't last between you too then he wasn't right for you and you probably deserved better than him anyway. >¶Øʆ< |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
I used to 'feel like I'm worthless to this world'. I loved the poem, Min. and I think I agree with the others here so nothing to add! good luck and keep posting. ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nice. I like the way the poem was written. Welcome to passions!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Thank you everyone. Today I went to the hospital because of my back it sucked oh wel. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Remember that you aren't useless to the world...you're a real, living person with a heart and a soul and a lot to offer the world...a strong and extremely well written poem, I hope things get better for you soon. *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
sorry to hear bout the injury.. but the poem captured your feelings well good job ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yes, indeed a nicely written poem. Thank you for sharing your feelings with us. Keep up the good work. Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
How many identities do you have on here ? I like this poem, nice job of expressing yourself."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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