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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-01-14 08:45 AM


December thirteenth,
Such a happy little girl
Who knew grampa’d die?

My grampa dies when I was 2 days old  


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I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me


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1 posted 2001-01-14 09:00 AM


Wow. That must have been a confusing time for your family, you know, happy for you; yet sad for the loss. Uck.
But this was very good, nice job.  
xoxo
Jenn


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2 posted 2001-01-14 10:45 AM


(mouth dropped) I am so sorry that happened 2 days after your birth that is quite sad as well as odd. And I am sorry you never got to know your grandfather
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3 posted 2001-01-14 12:24 PM


Oh I'm so sorry that happened, my father died when I was lik 5 months old so I sorta know what thats like. As for the poem it was a sad but good piece.

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4 posted 2001-01-14 03:17 PM


Great one here but very sad.......



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

Tamma
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5 posted 2001-01-14 06:00 PM


Yup my grampa died when I was 2 days old...they tell me he waited to see me before he went...and if anyone has ever heard the song "Holes in the Floor of Heaven", every important event of my life, it rains or snows.  


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6 posted 2001-01-14 06:03 PM


Nicely done, Tamma.  Welcome back to the forums.
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7 posted 2001-01-14 07:36 PM


you know Tamma...i was just gonna tell you the same thing...He did wait for you and that should make you feel very special

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8 posted 2001-01-14 11:14 PM


How sad....but I am sure he is watching over you! And it's sweet to think he held on just a little bit longer so he could see you. Well done!
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9 posted 2001-01-15 12:58 PM


the birthday challenge really brought out some odd momments..
sorry to heart about this one..

~JDR

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10 posted 2001-01-16 04:50 PM


Yeah, that must have been confusing for your family.  good job on the senryu.

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