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To Thee (Tell me what you think?)
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To Thee (Tell me what you think?) |
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lil_princess New Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 4 |
To Thee You stare at me, Through those big brown eye, As you softly touch my knee, You tell me your fibs and lies, And watch as I react to thee. Although these feeble words, Make me love you more nor less, You simple do not see, That while your stareing, Straight at me I do not stare back at thee. [This message has been edited by lil_princess (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Hi Lil_Princess ... check your e-mail and let me know if I can help with the missing text!  [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Hmmmm.. maybe it's an artistic statement. Y'know how sometimes an artist will sell a completely blank canvos for tons of money becuase they say it's a statement "of life and how nothing ever ... *insert boring philosophical stuff here*" ~_~ (/cynicism) Heh, lil_princess, thx for the reply to my poem, hope I can return the favor soon "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nice post. Welcome to passions!!!!!!!!!! Hope to see you around more. but yea, i liked this poem a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
I like this poem a very lot. Very discriptive as well as emotional. Wonderful work I do hope to see more of you around. And by the way WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!! I know you will love it here very much and i believe you will make a great addition to our "family of friends" Keep posting poems I am sure we all cant wait to hear more of them. ~Amanda~ |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very nice first post. Welcome to passions lil princess. I hope that you enjoy it here as much as I'm sure the rest of us do (I know that I do, I miss this place when I'm too bussy to stop by). I quite like the poem, reminds me of how my gf talked about her last relationship. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome To Pasions!Excellent first post! You definately have talent and i cant wait to see more from you! Keep them comin! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
W i really liked your first post. It E showed a lot of talent. Keep posting. L ~ JDR C O M E "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Not bad for a first post...welcome!! **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Nice job on your first post, I hope you like it here and post some more "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I must have missed this one somehow... I like the poem, "looking" at someone seems to me like it becomes synonymous with "understanding," and this is why you do not look back at this person. Welcome to Passions. -Allan |
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