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Allan Riverwood
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0 posted 2001-01-14 01:17 AM


wipe your teary eyes
though you feel you're all alone
i am at your side


Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.


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Melster
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1 posted 2001-01-14 02:47 AM


That was Beautiful Allan, We are all here for you Angel...

Melz!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

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2 posted 2001-01-14 04:27 AM


what a wonderful way to show support, allan..

angel, i dont know whats up but please feel free to email me if you need to vent to a stranger...sometimes confiding in someone who doesnt know about the situation might be easier, yes?

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3 posted 2001-01-14 10:31 AM


Allan~   I wish you could see this smile on my face. I haven't been this happy or felt this loved in who knows how long ago. Thank you so much for being at my side. You dont know how much you posting this means to me.



[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-14-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-01-14 03:01 PM


Beautiful allan. I liked this one a lot. *hugs you* awwwwwwww


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood
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5 posted 2001-01-14 05:08 PM


Melster, Kaile-  Yeah, i know.  Ain't i the greatest?  ~_^

Angel in Flight-We are always here for you.

Dopey Dope- *shudder



Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.


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6 posted 2001-01-15 04:46 PM


This is very good


"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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7 posted 2001-01-15 04:51 PM


This is sweet. You're really into the senryu thing?? HUH? j/k It takes a lot of talent to be able to put meaning into so little words.  
Nice one.
xoxo
Jenn


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8 posted 2001-01-16 05:46 PM


you're a good man Allan, yes you are

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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9 posted 2001-02-17 10:22 PM


Allan, Wonderful Senryu as usual even better because it is for me. Anyway I have to add this to my library so here you go~*~*~*~*~*alright done.

Life is like a storm, it passes you by without even knowing it~Amanda

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10 posted 2001-02-17 10:48 PM


I knwo I said I was going to leave, but I couldn't stay away form here. This is fantastic work! You're very good. I'll post a supportive poem of my own sometime.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

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