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FallNTears
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0 posted 2001-03-06 07:52 PM


Ever wonder how well you really know someone,
What they do after school,
When they go home to an empty house

How they can go home and wonder
Why they arent out with someone
Wishing they were someone else

Ever wonder if they cry themselves to sleep at night,
Wishing for a perfect life,
Or wishing theirs would end

Ever wonder how you can know someone
Without knowing the worse thing about them
Until they are gone?


*Me*

*Having a nightmare is nothing compared to living one.*

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Ina
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1 posted 2001-03-06 07:55 PM


I wonder all the time. I honestly hope that this has nothing to do with you. BUt if it is i know the exact pain you feel.
email me, AIM (skatergirlz14), or icq me. if you ever need to talk.
Regina

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-03-06 08:00 PM


Yes... this is also quite interesting.
Well I'm with Regina. If you need anything, get me on AIM (wayfinder00). I also have MSN at the email in my profile, and ICQ.
I'm versatile when it comes to IM services.
See you around. Keep wondering.
~Allan


Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan


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3 posted 2001-03-07 03:28 PM


I liked this.........I wonder about a lot of things....and yes.....I wonder a lot about how people tick and what's going on in their lives.....some just aren't willing to tell, and I respect that.
Nicely done.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-03-07 03:41 PM


Posting more than three threads in one day is against the guidelines. Thank you.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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5 posted 2001-03-25 05:09 PM


pretty interesting piece if i may say
the thing is, we can't just say that everyone elses life is good, but mine
everyone has their own trials in life
we should never assume that someone's life is perfect
thus we don't hve to wonder about some of these things....
thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Fading Away
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6 posted 2001-03-26 07:57 PM


This is a very good poem. I enjoy reading your work. Don't stop writing. Nice job.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

ethel lahootie
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7 posted 2001-03-26 08:16 PM


i must admit i wonder alot...about all sorts of ppl...specially the ones i kno but not that well. this was good...i like i liked!
~ethel~

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