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At Least you have 13 Seconds. (For Angel in flight)
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At Least you have 13 Seconds. (For Angel in flight) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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At Least You Have 13 Seconds: At least you have 13 seconds. You could have happiness, and love, and presumably everything good, yet in a matter of 13 seconds it could dissapear. In 13 seconds a heart could be lifted, and then all of a sudden drop. In 13 seconds a world could have peace and then break out into war. In 13 seconds I could stop writing this and commit the grand sin. All this in an amount of 13 seconds. Yet continually people live on. Some with lives of terror and a countable few with joy, and do you know why we live? Because some of us are positive and realize at least we have life, at least we have love. All a man really needs in life is, and will forever be, true love. It is the love that picks us up when we are down. Yet in 13 seconds that love can contradict itself into hate. And if you have lost everything, including love, then I say this: At least you have 12 seconds.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
a poem so good he posted it twice! very good poem dope. angel has a very good guy givin her advice.  San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Powerful poem, DD. Good job. I'm still trying my "inspirational" piece. You hit this one out of the park. Keep up the sensational work, man. ~_^ Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Dopey~I at least have 12 seconds... thank you so much it is beautiful. For once in my life i feel loved and it is because of you. I appreciate it more then you will ever know. written at 14 or not it has helped me today. Sigh..... |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wish I started writing at a younger age good ideas here in your youth thanks for sharing ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Ah, very nice poem DD. In fact, would you mind if I printed this out and put it in my poetry book? It's very few poems that hit me just right to want to keep them with me so that I can read them whenever I want, but this is one of them. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Good work Dopey, knowing that you can help someone out always makes it more worthwhile huh!! I am glad to see that I aint the only one writing at such a young age... I too have been writing since I was about 10-12... and that was a LONG time ago... too long ago!! Melz!!< !signature--> You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... [This message has been edited by Melster (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Dragon......do as you like with it..... Thanks everybody for reading this.... I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem, I'd descibe it as, as, unrefined excellence. nice job on it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I really liked this Dopey. This was....thought provoking. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Dopes, I just tripled my respect points for you cause you have a beautiful heart...that's all I have to say p.s. don't get the idea that im gay  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwwwww!!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
This poem is so true and I feel where you are coming from...I felt the piece so all I hvae to say is "Aquien Dios ama, le llama" Hey I loved it |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I really like this one...I loved the ending, it fit perfect. I agree with you that true love is all you need in life...and it changes your life so much. Great poem! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow, this is incredibly sweet Dopey. Man I've gotta make better friends with people on this site...how bout you give hints to my guyfriends to write something like this for me aye?  Good jobHasta luego Bel |
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