navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #4 » Life Goes On
Teen Poetry #4
Post A Reply Post New Topic Life Goes On Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Tamma
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-01-13 08:00 PM


Life goes on
So they always tell me
Life goes on
But it still hurts so much
Life goes on
But I’m still in love with you
Life goes on
We’re still together
Life goes on
You’ve left your mark on me
Life goes on
With us still in love
Life goes on
With you in my future
Life goes on
With me in your arms
Life goes on
With you in my heart
Life goes on
With me in love with you
Life goes on
And I want to spend it with you
Life goes on
And I Love you

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~
~*~ Forever ~*~
< !signature-->

www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner
I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me  



[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 01-13-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
a_little_girl
Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
1 posted 2001-01-13 08:10 PM


The aches of the heart can be truely lasting, Tamma.

**No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.**
~a_little_girl



Melster
Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia
2 posted 2001-01-13 08:14 PM


That is beautiful Tamma, you are a lucky girl to have found someone soooo valuable!!
Great Work, keep it up!!!
Melz!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

jeremydraul
Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
3 posted 2001-01-13 09:09 PM


looks like you have true inspiration

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Dopey Dope
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2001-01-13 11:25 PM


Sweet


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Morouxshi San
Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico
5 posted 2001-01-13 11:27 PM


im wit dopey on this one!


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
6 posted 2001-01-16 04:42 PM


Nicely said in this one, keep them coming

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Angel in Flight
Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381

7 posted 2001-02-03 06:54 PM


Great poem. And thank you for sharing

What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda


Allan Riverwood
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502
Winnipeg
8 posted 2001-02-03 07:14 PM


Aww... so positive.
I love it.  Well done Tamma.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

katherine
Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Canberra Australia
9 posted 2001-02-04 01:39 AM


great poem. so so sweet!!

~kate~

Tamma
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
10 posted 2001-02-04 09:47 AM


Thankx for the comments, ya'll but I've already forgotten what Justin and I were arguing about in this one...hehe

www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner
I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me


Jenn Cirrincione
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107
Fl
11 posted 2001-02-04 09:53 AM


Very sweet. All tho long over, heartache can stick around!! Thanks for sharing.
xoxo
Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



Acies
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
12 posted 2001-02-04 03:39 PM


good for you Tamma
good to be open minded about life
thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



sweetstuff101
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
13 posted 2001-02-04 05:59 PM


Life does go on....even when u are in pain, and even when u just want it to stop so u can live that moment for a little longer. Well ur poem was awesome! Keep postin!

Much Luv,  
  ~*~P*R*I*S*C*I*L*L*A~*~


How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #4 » Life Goes On

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary