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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
This is the poem that I wrote to ask my gf steph out just this last tuesday. If you're interested she did say yes =) anyway, I just thought I'd share this one with you all. A cherubic face An angelic smile My heart sings of these As I wander the mile A kitten... my kitten for now Her beautifule face Her mezmorizing smile These are thigns that make my heart race Close at hand Or far from here My kitten is at hand In this teddy bear. My dar one Your face I clearly see Let's be on our way... Go out with me? "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
That must be the cutest thing i have ever heard in my life. Beautiful poem |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I had a kitty twice... one died, the other moved out. Good poem... even though you weren't talking about a "kitty" at all, and I just read that and am editing this message and feel like a fool x_X < !signature--> Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
great poem, and it obviously accomplished the task, keep writin. "Eternal life without darkness is a life without sleep?" >¶Øʆ< |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very sweet... Im sure most girls would fall for you if you did that... nice work. ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Heehee, yeah, it did it's task quite well  ugh, of course right at this moment she's kicking my hinney at checkers... ugh, I'll get her to play chess yet anyway, I'm glad you like the poem, more, I'm glad stephy liked the poem. (as a little side note, the part about the teddy bear is cuase she gave me one for x-mas cuase she knows I collect them... ummm forget I said anything about collecting anything)."Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Teddy bears are sooooo cute... I have heaps of them... they are great!! Anyway... I am glad that she accepted your offer, who could resist and offer like that? She is a lucky gal!! Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Awwww...the innocence of childhood...how I long for it...< !signature--> **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl [This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great.......glad to know she went out with u.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Melster heheheh, yeah, teddy bears are adorable I sleep w/ all of mine... oops, really should keep my mouth shut ~_~ or my fingers still as the case my be. Heh, she may be a lucky gal, I can't really say, but I'm a lucky guy to have her. a_little_girl My frist thought of a reply was something quite philosophical (sp?) but then my mind realized it wasn't awake, so I went and got a cup of tea and forget what I was gonna say  anyway, innocence is, IMO, just another word for ignorance.DD What do you mean went? heheh, we're still going out "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this poem was so cute!! It would win any gurl over!!! Hehehe |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
*sighs* why wont my cookies for this site work? ugh.... ah vell. Anyway, i'm glad you like the poem, though I'd already won her heart before I asked her out "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Good poem. I finally got the nerve to share my poems, but I could never ask someone out with one,you got guts man! Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
It dosn't take guts so much as it takes confidense (sp?) in yourself. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is great, I'm glad to hear she liked it and you certainly have to have something to ask a girl out using a poem. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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