Acire, you should do that more often! I absolutely loved both of them. The first I can relate to, this is definitely my first experience where I can share my feelings and thoughts with such a vast group of individuals. The second one is powerful and pessimistic. I love it. ~_^ Greatly done, Acire. I truly think that you met the challenge well.
San Juan, Puerto Rico
I believe you met the challenge very well. I just love your first one I feel that way also, and about your second i feel that way alot so it makes me very sad that others feel that way to. Great job though. ~Amanda~
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They're both cool....I joined 6-7-99, so in that sense we share a birthday! The second one reminded me of another poem, called "Birthday," and descibing the birth of a child and comparing it to jumping into enemy territory. The last lines went, "Sentenced me to life. I guess I deserved it." LOL!
On the streets w/ people