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Not a poem but a challenge for you all that i am in much need of
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Not a poem but a challenge for you all that i am in much need of |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Throughout my life many bad things have happened to me that i have never told anyone about. When i was young my father died at a baseball game infront of eveyone. over christmas vacation my mother died. CAn someone please make a poem that states that there are people here for you and you are not alone, that tells that there is hope, and everything will be alright in the end. I need something saying to never give up keep the faith and keep going no matter what happens in my life. This may be hard for somepeople because i have not given many details or an example, but for this i just ask of you to let your imagination, creativity,and Faith for a brighter tommarrow run wild. Thank you all. Sincerely Amanda |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I had no idea that you carried such a burden. If my edge truly has been found again, I'll give it a shot. -Allan Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Thank you so much Allan it would mean the world to me if you could even try. Thank you once again |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I will give it a go as soon as I can and let you know what I come up with okies!! Melz!! P.S. I think I have a few tucked away somewhere that I will dig up!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
melz~ Thanks for the smile |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
youre new and all so we really dont know much about you and you prolly dont know much about you (speculations) theres some really good uplifting poems in the old Teen Poetry, i have some (almost all of them) and from a lot of other poets aswell, so you could learn a bit of the boards history while looking for it. and i dont know if the admins will let this posted but youre supposed to have a poem in the main post. so if you add something like "roses are red, violets are blue. i would like a poem, you can help too" i think it should be ok. just trying to help out. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Morouxshi San was right Amanda ... we do like to reserve the Teen Forum for poetry specifically. We created a Forum called Teen Explorer, which all of you can use for a number of things, including challenges, poetry discussions, specific critque and help, etc. I'm going to lock this thread for you, and move a copy to Teen Explorer where others can respond from there. Thanks for understanding ...  |
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