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Angel in Flight
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0 posted 2001-01-12 11:53 PM


Allan I dont know whats going on in your life but it seems like you are going through someting very tuff. So i wished to hand this poem on to you that a friend had given me . I never showed it to anyone in my life because it was so special. Now i believe someone else can use it and please use it wisely and hopefully it will help.

When things go wrong as they sometimes will,
when the road your trudging seems all up hill,
When the funds are low and the debts are high,
and you want to smile but you have to sigh.
when care is pressing you down a bit.
Rest if you must but DONT YOU QUIT!!
Life is queer with it’s twists and turns as everyone
of us sometimes learns.
And many a failure turns about when you might have won
had you stuck it out. Dont give up, though the pace
seems slow you may succeed with another blow.
Success is failure turned inside out the silver tint of the
clouds of doubt.
And as you never can tell how close you are you may be
near when it seem so far. So stick to the fight when your hardest hit
it’s when things seem worst that you must not quit



[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-13-2001).]

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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-01-13 12:01 PM


You have no idea how loved i feel!  I now have two poems in here dedicated to ME!  ~_^
Seriously, thank you very very much.  The problem is nearing a close, I'll just have to see.
It helps to know that I have the support of my friends.
Thank you for this.
-Allan< !signature-->

Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.



[This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 01-13-2001).]

Angel in Flight
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2 posted 2001-01-13 12:04 PM


Dear Allan,
I am here for you if you ever need to talk and i am very happy you feel loved because you truly are by me for one and i know by many others. I thought it might help you just a bit and am very glaid it did. Goodluck with your problem nearing a close. You'll be in my thoughts and prayers always.
Love Amanda



[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-13-2001).]

jeremydraul
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3 posted 2001-01-13 12:08 PM


wow, allan your quite the guy eh?
nice contribute angel

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Melster
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4 posted 2001-01-13 12:25 PM


Im with Jeremy...  you are becoming quite a guy in here Allan...  Good work Angel, he is a great person huh, Im soo glad he stumbled our way!!

Melz!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

Melster
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5 posted 2001-01-13 12:25 PM


Im with Jeremy...  you are becoming quite a guy in here Allan...  Good work Angel, he is a great person huh, Im soo glad he stumbled our way!!

Melz!!

Angel in Flight
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6 posted 2001-01-13 01:13 PM


Thanks you guys just trying to help another out.
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7 posted 2001-01-13 01:19 PM


Nice tribute angel



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Morouxshi San
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8 posted 2001-01-13 01:59 PM


i have no idea what is going on with you allan, but angel seems to care and she wrote a very nice poem.
so i hope you dont lose hope that it will all pass.
< !signature-->

San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...


[This message has been edited by Morouxshi San (edited 01-13-2001).]

Lakewalker
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9 posted 2001-01-16 03:58 PM


This is a really good poem and it's great of you to share it!

"So stick to the fight when your hardest hit
it’s when things seem worst that you must not quit"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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