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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne 
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She stands before the mirror, and looks into the glass; the make up that she wears, hides the secrets from her past. The way she's been abused is why she can;t decide, should she end it all? or keep it all inside? She sees the pictures in her mind' the worst is saved for last. She looks down at her fisted hand, and thrusts it through the glass. This poem really means a lot to me its bout my sister when she was alive. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Welcome to our humble forum, your majesty. ~_^ I know that you will really enjoy your time here, we are a small family of poets, but we have much to give and gain. It's good to see you. Thanks for posting this one, I remember when you read it to me. It's a favourite of mine. Well done, and keep up the good work! Yours, -Allan Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Welcome to Passions! It's great to have you here. A very powerful and thought provoking poem here, well done. Keep up the good work! *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
excellent work, you'll make a fine addition here. Very emotional, which of course is the sign of a great poet. I hope to see more of your work< !signature--> >¶Øʆ< [This message has been edited by Poet on Acid (edited 01-12-2001).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very good rhyming i enjoyed it dearly welcome by the way! ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
This is a great peice... I hope that the memory of your sister lives on and that you are in some sort of way happy still... We are all here to help you in anyway possible, so if there is anything we can do, just let us know... we are always willing to help our friends here at Passions! MelZ!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
You see, Sarah? I told you that they would welcome you with open arms! Thanks for dipping into our small world, and I hope that you remain. A lot of my writing was done with you in mind. It will help to have somewhere to discuss and exhange these thoughts other than MIRC, won't it? Don't shy away now. Keep writing, and posting. Yours, -Allan Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Dear Sarah, You most likely do not comprehend what an impact this had on me. It truly "changed my life" Thank you for sharing just in time. oh and by the way WELCOME your going to love it here. Everyone is very nice and are always willing to help you out if you need it. Welcome to our little family what a wonderful addition you will be. [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! This first post was good. I am sorry about your sister. I surely do hope that you enjoy your time here. Hope to see you post and reply more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Welcome to Passions, I trully hope you enjoy it here as much as i do. I'm quite sorry about your sister... it must be hard to lose such a close family member. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to passions! good poem there. ->hope<- you keep postin!< !signature--> San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... [This message has been edited by Morouxshi San (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
nice work! welcome to Passions. my best wishes for u...keep posting! ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
welcome to passions. hope u enjoy it here. hope to see your stuff here. great first post. im very sorry about your sister. Regina |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! it's great to see another member join the community. I hope you feel as welcome in here as everyone does feel. Im sorry to hear about your sister a heart warming first post thanks for sharing hope to see you again I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome To Passions!! This was such an incredible poem!! It took my breath away to say the least. You have so much emotion in your words and i look forward to reading more of your work. I am very sorry for the lost of your sister. Amazing poem...Keep them coming! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions You did a very good job on your first post here, and I too hope to see you post some more. Please. Pretty please  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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