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Follow Your Dreams |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Follow your dreams Half a year ago today a flower had wilted away, and as the last pedal had to fall, my dreams were scattered with the trauma of it all. And though the pieces were laborious to find. The flower bloomed within my mind. I sculptured diligently through day and night. anticipating the pieces would fit all right, but when it was consummated it wasn’t the same. I unearthed it wasn’t the flower that wilted away. So I contemplated and tried hard to see. In the end I found what I lost...... was.... me. [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Miracle Junior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 22 |
This was a interesting poem and wonderfully written I might add. I am not exactly sure how it all comes together, but maybe you or someone can explain it to me and keep writting always. Ps Sorry to hear about your mom. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Wow... this piece really reminds me of what we are capable of doing when we really wish to recover some piece of our lost selves. Thank you so much, I believe that this could be helpful to me. -Allan |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Allan~ I am happy I might be able to help someone, and am even more happy that i might be able to help a member here at passions. Well i just want to say whatever you have lost inside of yourself dont stop searching for a way to find it, but remember it will come back only when you least believe it will, and when it does... It will be beautiful. Dont give up |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very very cool piece work, keep writing ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
This is beautiful Angel... I think a lot of people feel lost at sometime during their lives... I hope that you recover soon!! Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Thank you everyone. [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow....great poem. I truly enjoyed this one. You have true talent.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ive become a big fan of your writing i feel like you are going thru exactly the same things i am our views on life and ourselves are pretty much similar that's not only the reason why i love your writing it's cause you put it down in a beautiful set of words...that is talent thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Dopey~ Thank you for your kind words to me Acrie~ i am happy you enjoy my poetry and thank you so much for thinking i have talent that means alot to me Thank you once again |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Great poem, as always, though I am begining to see a pattern in your poems...I hope everything works out for you in the end... >¶Øʆ< |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one is written very well, I like the way your words go together, nice job  < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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