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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: It's a song. .........you know.....the way I pick my poems to be on here is random. I have a list of all my poems and I close my eyes and point to the screen and the thing I land on is what I post. Ok so here you go....luck you. For Fame: Sitting in chocolate mud of past. The remembrance of all that was. Pissing out that evil stench. Looking down, a downward bend. Whispering out the cries. Trying to conquer nothing. Sit up, prepare your lies. It's all x2 for fame. It's all x2 a game. It's all x2 a hell. It's not x2 oh well. Pressing on a forward path. Diagonal direction lives up to its name. Everything is done for fame, but hey..........hey...........hey. Tears run down my sides. My sides run up my tears. Life lives in fear. In fear of you It's all x2 for fame. It's all x2 a game. It's all x2 a hell. It's not x2 oh well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I get the overall meaning of this, but some of it just flew right over my head. Yeah, anyway, nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
yah, i agree with lake your a very deep writer "Tears run down my sides. My sides run up my tears." that was brilliant ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
the little part Jermey took out was what i wanted to put in my reply. Those two lines were amzing, very genius. good poem regina |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Mmm....Carly like...Carly like lots... inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yeah, very very creative indeed. Another thing that makes me remember why I began writing in the first place. I just might be finding my edge again, with all of your help. Who knows? I loved this song, keep it up. -Allan Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
As with all your songs Dopey, this is no exception... this was a great one.. keep it up!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
yes...this is great, Dopey! ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Dopes you always give this brain spasm you are very deep with your writings i have to go thru it a couple fo time you do a great job though very talented I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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