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January 12, 1984 (Allan's Challenge)
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January 12, 1984 (Allan's Challenge) |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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Yes, it's my birthday. I hated being 16. Time to move on. Hope you like it. "January 12, 1984" A picturesque art Portrayed brilliantly by me Through birthing process J.D. Raulinaitis < !signature--> "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 01-12-2001).] |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
LOL ok i was just looking at yours then at mine...mine looks like the work of a 2yr old compared you and allen's. im so bad at this lol ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The giving of life is beautiful! You describe it wonderfully. Great way to meet the challenge!  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Great to see you picking up on the challenge so nicely. A nice take on Birth. Exellently written. Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Jeremy! Great take on the challenge, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit I just came back to say "Happy Birthday! (tomorrow)  [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Happy b-day tomorrow! have a good one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope you mean that you're being born and not that you're having the baby haha, sorry, I know I'm not funny Happy Birthday tomorrow "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
GReat work... much better than my lame attempt, happy birthday by the way... MelZ!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
first of all, HAPPY BIRTHDAY secondly, Nice job...I'm now looking forward to doing the challenge too  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Happy Birthday "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Happy birthday Jeremy! There's a party for you in Announcements, just look here: /pip/Forum3/HTML/000809.html |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Jeremy Happy Birthday may all your wishes come true |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Happy Birthday, Jer. If I haven't said it twice before... ~_^ Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awwwww... happy belated.....!! You're just a baby!!!! Oh to be 16 again.... hehehe me and my senile 18 year old self... xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
happy belated... from a grouchy 20 yr old, i say 16 is a fine age to be...not too old to have pure childish fun and not too young to start demanding some privacy from your parents... hope it was memorable!!  |
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