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October 26, 1984 (Allen's challenge)
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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October 26, 1984 Overwelming joy for this new creature we've made Oops! dropped on its head -=haha ok so i really wasnt dropped on my head, but oh well..i dont remember anything from my birth lol suprise surpise... < !signature--> ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
lmao that was funny, i thought it was true until you said it wasnt.. hahah good one DQ! ~JDR< !signature--> "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hehe... this was cute! Challenge well met!  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
hahaha Very, very, very well done! I didn't expect that! What a twist of event! You started it out so preciously... grasping such a mood... and then OOPS! haha... Nice, Dancinqueen. Keep writing Senryu. Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... great twist on the challenge DancinQueen, loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
hehe, very funny......i likes.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Glad to hear it's not true, that can really hurt *gets up off floor* (Oh wait, i'm not a little baby) So, uh, nice job on this, I like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ha ha ha  you sure it never really happened? j/k sweets i love it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
HAHA Funny how no one has mentioned the fact that we have no actual memory of our birth, till I read this one. I suppose we all may have been dropped on our heads... who's actually going to tell there kid if they were??? hehe. This was pretty funny Chllenge met... nice jobJason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hahahaha cute!! I liked this. And you are very correct.... no one knows what really happened at their own birth! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
my eyebrows lifted up when i read the last line...glad that this hasnt really happened to you..gosh it will be pretty traumatizing to have such a thing happen on your first day.... |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
LOL! Nice surprise at the ending! |
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