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a thank you to a nice person
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a thank you to a nice person |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Well I though I would write this to someone, and he knows who he is..so enjoy it...thank u so much As I think about all the words you said to me in the last few days, I notice a pattern You're always giving me some sort of advice that makes me think well thats the next best pyscholgist I could ever have I do not know you so well to judge you or try and figure out why you care so much in the way to help a sad soul "inhale. It helps. And do not exhale until you can remember only what you want to." thats probaly the best advice I could recieve from someone I know so little about I may not be smart or very keen but I do understand alot about things, I think I might be crazy for writing such a poem to a a sorta stranger, but pardon me I really do not care You have helped in a great deal and you may not realize that so thank you is really what I must say pity is for those who are in their minds superior to those they see walking in the street something u said I felt like twisting it around so thank you, for all you have said, and never once wasted your time with pity so now I must finish for I fear the King and Queen I live with are becoming quite angry..... Regina |
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Baby Gansta Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 24 |
Well done Ina, that was a great poem, I know how you feel, cause I too find it easier to talk to strangers, he seems like a good friend, hope he knows the way you feel! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
great respectful poem im glad to see people giving thanks a great poem for the new forum best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ina, thank you for writing a wonderful poem. I'm glad that you and I are helping each other so much, and my friendship means something to you. The fact that you wrote a poem about this is truly touching. I suppose that we are strangers, are we not? Having never seen one another. But I know what you feel, Regina. I know why you think like you do. You and I are very similar. Keep in mind that i shall always be here for you to talk to, as will everyone else in the forum. Your writing is truly magnificent, and you are a very thoughtful person. Don't let outer forces determine your self-worth, determine it for yourself. I am saying this in the open because there are probably others reading this that need this advice as well. We are many, Regina. You might not realize it, but there are many people like us. The fact that they hide their feelings, as opposed to express them as we do, doesn't make them any different. I hope that you never forget that I am your friend for life, and I hope that you think of me when you exhale. -Allan Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
 you knew who I was talking about Allan? I thought you would. When I exhale i do think about u. thank u . I want to write a long reply but I already said what I wanted to say.Regina talk to u later. those who love us,will always love us.those who hate us,may g-d turn their hearts,if he cant may he turn their ankles so we can see them by their limp |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwwwwwww Ina, so sweet. Glad Allan is helping.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I love how Passions can bring people together like this. This is a beautiful tribute to your new companion. I hope you both contenue to help each other through the difficulties of your lives... friends like that are priceless. Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It's great that you can help each other. There's something in jeremy's reply that i'd like to repeat: "im glad to see people giving thanks". nice job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Cool poem! It's awesome that almost total strangers can come together and help each other out. Well, I guess we share one thing in common at least, I think we all have an awesome talent.I'm gonna start crying here if I get any more mushy so... Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great Work, you have written a great tribute to a great person!! Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
there is definitely no wrong in showing someone your appreciation. Actually, writing a poem for them is really sweet. Goog job here girl  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
thank you all for your relpys, they mean alot. Regina |
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