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No Girls, No Cry
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No Girls, No Cry |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
Since I knew you My life has changed Now I believe that... No girls, no cry Why I keep losin'? I need this heart My life's much better If me an' no girl I hate the fact that Alot of girls need me Just we being friends I hate walking... If a girl watchin' me This is my life! I'm gettin' over And I'll keep sayin' No girls, no cry ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is sad. I get that "no men, no cry" thing all the time. One day you'll find happiness.  xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yes, sad. Good poem. Good luck. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Good job here buddy. Keep writing ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Baby Gansta Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 24 |
A sad poem. Don't let anyone get you down, a great poem, well done. |
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Baby Gansta Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 24 |
A sad poem. Don't let anyone get you down, a great poem, well done. |
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Bright_Eyes Junior Member
since 2000-12-22
Posts 29Plymouth, MN |
In this poem I think the use of slang/dialect is wonderful. It really adds to what you're trying to say. You can almost see a boy all fed up with women. Nice job! I hope this too will pass.... |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
sometimes a guy can go through this but I belive girls go through it more never the less, this poem captures those feelings well good job ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Kinda reminded me of the Bob Marley song....No woman, No cry....Nice one though. I liked it a lot. Seems like you're having women probs........happens to the best of us pal. You'll pull through.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The message in this one shows well, great job on it. ...and nice style "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Don't give up hope... Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
A Bob Marley song?! I want to listen to it. thanks all of you... ~lotsa luv< !signature--> "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" [This message has been edited by GirlsBestFriend (edited 01-12-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i guess we all feel this way sometimes but you should look at the brighter side too maybe in time  great post keep em coming I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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