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JFrizzua
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since 2001-03-25
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0 posted 2001-03-25 01:36 AM


I miss your smell.
I miss your skin.
I miss your taste.
I miss your smile.
I miss your eyes.
I miss your laugh.
I miss your touch.
I miss your hugs.
I miss your body.
I miss your heart.
I miss your love.
I miss our jokes.
I miss our smiles.
I miss our secrets.
I miss our hard times.
I miss when we were together.
I miss when we were apart.
I miss when we cried.
I miss when we argued.
I miss the way I was.
I miss the way you were.
I miss the way you said my name.
I miss the way I love you sounded.
I miss the way you made me crazy.
I miss the way your body felt next to me.
I miss the way your hand fit into mine.
I miss the lies.
I miss the pain.
I miss the tears.
I miss that day in the park.
I miss that night on the boat.
I miss that time you said yes.
I miss the first time I met you.
I miss the first time I said your name.
I miss the first time I kissed you.
I miss the first time I touched you.
I miss the first time I said I love you.
I miss missing you.
I miss...well.
I miss you.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-03-25 07:39 AM


Hello, and Welcome to Passions! I don't think you missed a sense OR emotion in this first poem! Make sure you hop over to Open Forum #13 to post your next one! Check your e-mail for a special Message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-03-25 03:47 PM


Seems to be a day for missing those we love. I know you have spoken for me. I like this a lot. Welcome!
JFrizzua
New Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 2

3 posted 2001-03-25 08:26 PM


thanks..

yea.. I'm going to spend a long time missing her..

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
4 posted 2001-03-26 03:39 AM


We miss those we love when they are not with us; however don't allow the missing to dig a deep hole into a day.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 507

5 posted 2001-03-26 10:07 AM


I could fall into this and cry a river. This tugs heartstrings. Welcome!

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

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