How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #12 Archive
 Platonic Winter
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Platonic Winter

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
RMW
Senior Member
since 03-21-2001
Posts 1446


0 posted 03-24-2001 02:23 PM       View Profile for RMW   Email RMW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RMW

Platonic Winter

We've reached beyond our conversation,
Extending, if not hands then twigs of caring
For each other's thought. By sharing drops of each
We risk our own. Like pearls of rain
Dangling from a leafless arch
They inch along with hope to touch and coalesce.
Most fall short and puddle
Like the coffee spilled between us.
Though some, frozen out of cycle,
Venture on
Suspending
Spring.

RMW

© Copyright 2001 RMW - All Rights Reserved
Packratmike
Senior Member
since 02-25-2001
Posts 635
California, USA


1 posted 03-24-2001 02:45 PM       View Profile for Packratmike   Email Packratmike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Packratmike

"Like pearls of rain
Dangling from a leafless arch
They inch along with hope to touch and coalesce."

Excellent! I loved this one! Thank you for a very nice read.

Mike

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 07-11-2000
Posts 11011
highways, & byways, for now


2 posted 03-24-2001 03:35 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

RMW - very nice, first one of your writings I have read. I'll be back for more.

BC
Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 11-23-1999
Posts 15611
Lansing, MI USA


3 posted 03-24-2001 05:08 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I'm really impressed with the images that you can bring out. . .

excellent. . .

-----------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Trillium
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 03-09-2001
Posts 12129
Idaho, USA


4 posted 03-24-2001 05:18 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Very enjoyable read. Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

Betty Lou Hebert

RMW
Senior Member
since 03-21-2001
Posts 1446


5 posted 03-24-2001 06:22 PM       View Profile for RMW   Email RMW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RMW

Mike, BC, Sven, Trillium,

Thank you all. And, have a pleasant evening.

Bob
Joyce Johnson
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 03-10-2001
Posts 10059
Washington State


6 posted 03-24-2001 07:47 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Very good writing. It's worth another go
around. I'm sending you back to the top. Joyce
Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 10-28-1999
Posts 5247
state of confusion


7 posted 03-27-2001 09:01 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

You've captured the essence of that unending hope for love:

Though some, frozen out of cycle,
Venture on
Suspending
Spring.

We'd like to think love in the cards for all of us...

I'd publish this one.

Corinne
RMW
Senior Member
since 03-21-2001
Posts 1446


8 posted 03-27-2001 09:25 AM       View Profile for RMW   Email RMW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RMW

Thank you, Corinne. Bob
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 10-29-2000
Posts 19275
Between the Lines


9 posted 04-28-2004 07:02 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

enjoying rereading you...just wanted to let you know...


M
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #12 >> Platonic Winter Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors