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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2001-03-22 05:14 PM


Role Models

Reflecting on those who shaped my life
for good or ill, I ponder did they make me me?
A mother who never struck me, a dad who did just once
Their love showed through and I was no dunce
I followed their example

Dr. J - almost an uncle, mentor, teacher, friend
I had free rein of his library, treasured every word
Balzac, encyclopedias and more
timeless words by the score

Bronte, Wordsworth, Shakespeare, poets of note
He subscribed to Esquire and Fortune as well
I worked alongside my dad in supermarkets
stocking shelves to sell for cookies in my pocket

Mom let me help in the kitchen
I made cookies when I was 8
She made sure I knew how to set a table
and taught me about love and respect
When she died I was able

My aunt taught me hospital corners
watched her wash my cousin's mouth with soap
I watched my language and learned my manners
I think I told you I was no dope

Had Erector sets, Tinkertoys, Lincoln logs to boot
with Chemistry sets I made some bombs
A miracle I'm still here
made them with my innocent aplomb

An eclectic mix to be sure
I thought of Engineering
ended in computers, often wondered how I'd be
If I'd chosen architecture, psychology
literature or poetry as you see

Then Father Lucid taught me tolerance
allowing no ethnic slurs
But it took a long time
for other negative ideas
to be dispelled from my brain
took nearly thirty years before
I could accept gays equally with straight

Overcame Catholic thought in my thirties
contraception came easy,
then abortion was still a sin
I was to the right of Attilia the hun

But I learned of worker's plights
and learned even more of women's rights
and when I saw the National Parks
they lit in me more than sparks

I saw strip mines, forests laid bare
that's when I knew someone should care
When bottled water became the norm
my liberal's heart was fully born

I got tired of 'studys', legislative inaction
There's this nation we have, but we rent it you see
and the fee that we pay, is our kids' legacy
Because when we die, we must think what we're leaving
and if it's polluted the young will too soon be grieving

So when I see those who cheer for the mining
or grazing the land we want for our children
polluting with oil or cyanide's tailings
I'm filled with wonder as we listen to railings

They see how our cities are ravaged by shootings
They blame the poor when in riots there's lootings
Guns aren't to blame, 'make more!' these folks say
Like George it seems - they like "Make my Day"

Gays who once fought in World War II
Can't fight anymore it's immoral too
It's ok if they're fighting alongside of you
But in times like these we beat them black and blue

Kill wildlife and Whales, pay less for gas than for water
Don't blame the corporations, dividends pay so we 'oughter'
Should elections be paid for by special interests or by people
Should our morals come from laws or from what we hear beneath steeples

I could go on and on, how some distort our nation's values
Twist and turn the best of Christian until some have no clue
God is Love - so Christ has taught us - and God will judge
Love's still good. Good role models ignore intolerant sludge



The first duty of love is to listen.

~ Paul Tillich ~

© Copyright 2001 Wilfred Yeats - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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1 posted 2001-03-22 06:14 PM


quote:
She made sure I knew how to set a table
and taught me about love and respect
When she died I was able


one of your best yet.... the microphone is yours... i'm listening.... a very fine write, my friend.... very fine  

lucky
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2 posted 2001-03-22 06:21 PM


Bill,

I'm thinking you were ready for me..? Nice insite...

Dale

Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal


Martie
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3 posted 2001-03-22 06:35 PM


Bill--Lots of thought and wisdoms learned, in this poem. Very well done!
Tennessee Angel
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4 posted 2001-03-22 06:57 PM


This is so awesome and wisdom-filled. Lovely thoughts!
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5 posted 2001-03-22 07:12 PM


a treasure...love this...


Greeneyes~


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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-03-22 08:19 PM


Reading every line, and enjoying the very last one most....

well done, Mr. Yeats!

Paula Finn
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missouri
7 posted 2001-03-23 02:27 AM


Applauding here sir
ethome
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8 posted 2001-03-23 03:59 AM


A treasure of memories Bill! Excellent!

"Teenagers who have strong emotional attachments
to their parents and teachers are much less likely to use drugs and
alcohol, attempt suicide, engage in violence or become sexually active
at an early age." Reports 'The Washington Post' Researchers at the
university of Minnesota and the university of North Carolina at Chapel Hill
also found that this holds true regardless of whether a child lives in a one
or two parent household. The important thing is that the child feels loved,
appreciated, and understood. Another factor the study emphasized is
"the importance of parents remaining intensely involved in their children's
lives through the teenage years, even when they feel their role is
diminishing," say the 'Post'."

Thanks for sharing your insights into growing up!

Corinne
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state of confusion
9 posted 2001-03-23 04:42 PM


This is a fantastic trip through your life, and life's observations!

Thank you for sharing it with us!

Corinne

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2001-07-06 04:35 PM


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