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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-03-22 03:10 PM

Whenever you question things
Or doubt the feelings true
Whenever the clouds cross your path
And color the feelings blue
Its like the whole world crashing in
Everything coming down on you
When you think that love has paled
Replaced by something new
When life seems to be so much
Dreams are impossible too

Think of how much I’ve been there
And how much we’ve been through
Time seemed to magnify the love
The faster time flew
Dream now of nothing but good things
And that I still love you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-22 03:39 PM

I'm sure she does....but don't ever stop telling her....

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2001-03-22 03:47 PM

'tis just a poem, nothing more.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-03-22 04:07 PM

Never is it "just a poem". Sweetly written from your heart.

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-03-22 09:53 PM

Ah, sweet Knight, you melted my heart with this one!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-03-23 04:25 AM

"Think of how much I’ve been there
And how much we’ve been through
Time seemed to magnify the love
The faster time flew
Dream now of nothing but good things
And that I still love you"

Don't know how anyone could say it simpler, better and with more honesty....good work!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-03-23 12:53 PM

tears just sprang to my eyes with this.....makes me miss a friend of mine terribly.....*sigh*.....beautifully done

SEA

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-03-23 01:29 PM

Yep, yep, yep, the name fits you. Beautiful poem!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

ForwardSearching
Junior Member

since 2001-03-23

Posts 35

8 posted 2001-03-24 11:57 AM

Very nice, feelings from the heart.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-03-24 05:12 PM

I agree with inot2B. . . it's never just a poem. . . but from the heart. . . like all of your writing is. . .

Excellent PK. . .

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