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Open Poetry #12

Slaughter House Rules

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-03-22 10:40 AM

Slaughter House Rules

Dark shadows blanket
my desert glow
A cloud in the form of a wolf
And I like a fool, offer myself up
as the sacrificial lamb...
To the masquerade smile
and arsenic laced voiced
My heart wasn't enough?
No... You came back for
my soul, through
the wrist bleeding

Jellybean King
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 153
Jelly, Bean

1 posted 2001-03-22 11:21 AM

...gothic and lush with sinister overtones...quite a memorable read! I liked:

My heart wasn't enough?
No... You came back for
my soul, through
the wrist bleeding

Jellybean King

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2001-03-22 11:48 AM

Yes.....to what Jellybean said.

Bob

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