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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-22 06:02 AM

Loneliness

When overwhelmed in loneliness
I try to think of you
Of first times and of last times,
my memories to view.

When overwhelmed in loneliness
thoughts pour from tear to tear
Of wishes only to be held
in arms of strength right here

Where I reside, that part of me
I'm clinging to so tight,
In room that dreams my days away
and fantasies each night.

When overwhelmed in loneliness
there's not much I can do
But treasure seek that part inside
that brings me close to you.
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

1 posted 2001-03-22 08:37 AM

A poem called Loneliness, and there was no replies on it...how ironic LOL

I liked this one alot.

Where I reside, that part of me
I'm clinging to so tight,
In room that dreams my days away
and fantasies each night.

That was a very nice stanza.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-03-22 08:40 AM

Yes, Maureen, I felt this one, I know what it's like to feel completely alone even when surrounded by friends and family. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2001-03-22 10:35 AM

"...but treasure seek that part inside..." Very well crafted. There seems to be a simplicity to this poem that draws the reader in. Well done.

Bob

DreamLess
Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 92

4 posted 2001-03-22 12:42 PM

loneliness the only feeling man doesn't like to feel it ...something i never want to feel it but i think (in my opinion) that you can find in this feeling a very strong emotins and many words were written starting from this feeling

i'm sorry i talked alot and almost forgot to tell you how stunnig is your words

love,

WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-03-22 03:53 PM

Very nice...sometimes I go for long drives, or drink a couple beers, or run wild like a wild stallion...James

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2001-03-22 08:18 PM

Wynter - I feel your thoughts and know your pain, but with your gift to write you will never be lonely. Write Wynter, as you have.

BC

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-03-26 08:32 AM

Poetic Knight
I thank you for responding to my loneliness, it's always nice when you are noticed..huggss

Kathleen
thank you for your caring ways *s

thank you Bob...I pretty much am a simplistic person...or so I think

Dreamless
you are very sweet thank you..and I hope you never have to feel loneliness... huggzz

James
if only I knew how to run wild..the drives I do..the drinking won't work..one will knock me out *w

BC
friends help Bill...thank you & huggzzzzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-26-2001).]

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