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Mabel A. Dilley
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0 posted 2001-03-22 02:40 AM







age-old jonquils bloom
fragranted Chomo Lhari
a Zen of seeing

"I am not now that which I have been."

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1 posted 2001-03-22 02:42 AM


Oh but it does a heart good to see a "proper" and beautiful Haiku every so often, just beautiful!
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2 posted 2001-03-22 10:22 AM


~I could read this beauty countless times. There's something about the impact these little ones have on me. Almost like I can take the three lines and run with them wherever I please. Enjoying this. *Peace.
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3 posted 2001-03-22 10:32 AM


a charming pocket poem....
Katherine Chandler
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4 posted 2001-03-22 03:51 PM


I simply love jonquils and this Haiku is every bit as lovely. Katie

Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

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5 posted 2001-03-23 12:59 PM


quote:
a Zen of seeing


I love this line. . . excellent Julian. . .

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6 posted 2001-03-23 02:14 PM


Julian: Just lovely!

Betty Lou Hebert

Mabel A. Dilley
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7 posted 2001-03-24 02:32 PM


Thanks to all for the comments and encouragement. Haiku formats are some of my favorites. Shalom, Julian

"I am not now that which I have been."

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