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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-21 08:27 PM



Soft-Toned

Light a candle, vanilla scented
and stay my thoughts with me.
Far away, my heart beats heard
pacing, desiring he.

When springtime love brings want of one
creating tapestries,
weaving are mind passages
as body craves appease.

First as love unfolds in sweet
array of fibers blend,
he comes to me in time reversed,
in yesterday's ascend.

And then into his waiting arms
his canvassed love brings sighs
intoxicating, tones of soft
heard 'neath the starlit skies.

~Wynter...

thanks Walt...it was your response to me that gave me the title

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-03-21 08:54 PM


What treasures we find in the words of a response.... Wynter ... marvelous...Walt...thank you...whatever you said, look at the wonders you created...
wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2001-12-06 01:27 AM


I am sorry I missed this one o yuh wish I knew the situation that inspired this nive write yuh
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-01-27 11:50 AM


just beautiful!
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