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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-03-21 07:45 PM

Kindling Spirits

read a line
on the wind
read it fine
indeed it said
kindred spirits
and
whoosh
in mind
we were
suddenly
one of a kind

so I'll kindle
with you
on my mind

kindred spirits
little red haired girls
living life
in swirly twirls

kindred spirits
of ghosts
that speak
having lived,
now memories,
tweak

kindling embers
glowing kind
flowing balm
to one's mind
kindling spirits
ever bind
knowing one
shall read
the lines

to entwine
and then
to sign
one of a kind

the kindling
chime

kindred spirits
toast and
cheer it
the thought
the way
the deed
the sway

come again
come what may

kindle beams
spindle dreams
along with me
dwindle time
so pleasantly
swindle not
the love
possessed
but give
and live
one last
caress

kindle your
spirit
in kindling
kind
that I might
rest forever
in your
mind

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-03-21 07:52 PM

and in the flame that remains. . . we will warm our hearts. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-03-21 09:19 PM

and this one rests easy in my mind ...
thank you for the read of kind

very cool Sun ... like the way your brought this one full circle.

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-03-21 10:37 PM

I loved this - it could be written for a friend or a protector, or for yourself, as who better to be in spirit with than yourself! Kudos.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-03-21 11:12 PM

That's the spirit, Sunshine.....

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

5 posted 2001-03-22 08:51 AM

Oh this one was very, very good. Such good presentation and rhyming, flowing softly.

sans38
Member

since 2001-03-03

Posts 117
Westland, Michigan

6 posted 2001-03-22 09:19 AM

This was wonderful! I loved it!

"Reflect upon your present blessings,of which every man has many - not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have
some."
--Charles Dickens

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-03-22 09:26 AM

Sunshine~ I love it when you write like this!! So awesome!

SEA

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-03-22 09:33 AM

Sunshine,
And so you shall. *L*

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2001-03-22 10:15 AM

Karilea--Yes in deed!

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

10 posted 2001-03-22 11:51 AM

"....so I'll kindle with you on my mind..." Quite romantic.

Bob

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

11 posted 2001-03-22 04:28 PM

"kindle your
spirit
in kindling
kind
that I might
rest forever
in your
mind"

I sincerely believe you rest in very many minds here in PiP - obviously mine among them

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