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Poetry and Candlelight
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Poetry and Candlelight |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 So beautiful to get lost in you... in the words that pull me to and fro Calling to me through the morning dew begging me to never let them go A welcome that lights my soul afire warming the coldest night frost Opening my eyes to heartfelt desire what it means to love at any cost Images spin like ballerinas of gold dancing to the melody of weave Falling over the roses silken fold blaming me with beauty when I grieve You spin the tales that lovers dance to I see your heart and soul shine I walk through the tales with you Making the visions you create...mine So I thank you from the depths of my heart for the words that accompany my night I can barely wait for the next fine weave to start Then I can get lost...in poetry and candle light  |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Oh, my Butterfly kid, this is ssssooo beautiful. Love every word. Hugs and love, Mom Earth |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Now. . . you know that I really love this one. . . it's wonderful. . .  -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh this is beyond beautiful!! Too cool! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Holly-girl~ I just love this~ The rhyme, flow, and sentiment is divine! All poets will relate deeply, I'm sure! My library must have this Take care, Melissa~ |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
WOW! This was truly beautiful!! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Holly, Holly, Holly....you whisp my words away.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was stunning, sweetie. You deserve all that and so much more. Love may have a price, but if it true it is well worth it. Wonderful to see you again. Your words are fabulous. What is that sound? I think I just heard a butterfly ROAR!!!!  Take care you. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So beautiful to get lost in you... ============================= A welcome that lights my soul afire warming the coldest night frost Opening my eyes to heartfelt desire what it means to love at any cost ======================= Falling over the roses silken fold blaming me with beauty when I grieve ========================== So I thank you from the depths of my heart for the words that accompany my night I can barely wait for the next fine weave to start Then I can get lost...in poetry and candle light ========================= ahhhhh written like a true moth poet (yayayaya) and HEY!! have ya been holding out on me wht the butterfly graphics LOL .... well you KNOW I loved every word of this... this is beautiful Holly-girl.. yes...poetry is like sanctuary late at night. (cuz everybody knows we moths dont sleep) nights are when the pretty blue flame shines the brightest yayayaya... "Falling over the roses silken fold blaming me with beauty when I grieve" how cool is that lovely line... cadence kissed adore of our most "faithful lover" ... poetry. So, ya got poetry...ya got candles... what else could we need..... (besides raspberry tea and a poet) hehehe  love this one.. and the poet who wrote it cuz shes grooooovy  (check out me new sig ... me found another moth anthem)  oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
WOW! you write this love-dovie stuff way better than i do... i'll have to sit down and take a lesson one day, hehe. i LOVE the title on this one, by the by. You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass. |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
Falling over the roses silken fold: I wish someone would!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Dennis |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very soft and lovely, I really enjoyed this. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You shine in this one, butterfly girl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
How about poetry and candlelight and kisses? James |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Exquisite poetry... upon the winds flew butterfly... with golden words, she touched the sky... |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Images spin like ballerinas of gold dancing to the melody of weave Falling over the roses silken fold blaming me with beauty when I grieve These lines were so cool. All of them were really. A real beautiful creation. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BDC~  This is gorgeous! I too liked the lines PK pointed out..........very nicely done!! SEA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"Falling over the roses silken fold blaming me with beauty when I grieve" I love the above...the whole poem is gorgeous! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
My heart felt thanks to each and every one of you...this was written with a special poet in mind for escape that was given to me through beautiful poetry that drew me into the visions that were woven...thank you all so very much for understanding the touch of poetry so well...the hand of poetry caresses the heart so very well~ |
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