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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-03-21 07:18 PM


Distance does not always come
in a measured form,
it can translate into
the feeling I have with you.
To be strong, I have let die
my heart, feelings that once
raised up when you came by
and left again without words.
Words became your conscience
that place you could hide,
by twisting your thoughts
you could collide my senses.
Now you fail in those,
the sentences you changed
and I wonder if you realize
the distance you have made.

© Copyright 2001 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 507

1 posted 2001-03-21 07:22 PM


I applaud. I love the depth of this. Excellent writing!

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

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