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each and every time..... (no more haleyja)

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Parker
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... the old black rum


0 posted 03-21-2001 04:27 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

each and every time

are you just a dream
that enters my mind
a sweetness so sublime

when i'm rushing to and fro
you sit in the background
of the very front row

my lips have spoken for you
when you could not
and listened as you talked

in the darkness when I dream
are you there love...
are you there beneath the rain

your a shadow in my thoughts
i've touched you, though i have not
and my finger tips have loved you
each and every time

James Parker Haley Feb 29, 2000
© Copyright 2001 James Parker Haley - All Rights Reserved
RMW
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1 posted 03-21-2001 04:40 PM       View Profile for RMW   Email RMW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RMW

James,

I like the juxtaposition of "background" and "front row".

RMW
Janet Marie
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2 posted 03-21-2001 04:40 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

my lips have spoken for you
when you could not
and listened as you talked

in the darkness when I dream
are you there love...
are you there beneath the rain

your a shadow in my thoughts
i've touched you, though i have not
and my finger tips have loved you
each and every time
==============================

now tell me how a moth is supposed to resist this

"i've touched you, though i have not
and my finger tips have loved you
each and every time"

that is such a poetically lovely line p-man...
sensual laced with longing...very nice.

and posted under any name ...
thy poetry is still thy flame
very cool poem Parker-babes..and a personal fave.

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

ethome
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3 posted 03-21-2001 04:46 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

"in the darkness when I dream
are you there love...
are you there beneath the rain

your a shadow in my thoughts
i've touched you, though i have not
and my finger tips have loved you
each and every time"

What marvels the mind can reveal about our inner being...that self within our self...that person that we don't know but think we know.... that anticipation of how we'd like things to be.......... that truth that consumes our desires..... those wonderful make sense while you're having them dreams ...time after time.........great write!! You're very good!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

JLR
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4 posted 03-21-2001 10:56 PM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

I'm with JMW (hope I remembered that right)...and I liked this so much. Touched or not. Great!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


5 posted 03-21-2001 11:02 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You know, your "other" name always brought a promise of "Parker"....

and now....I don't have to wonder at your brilliance...
Balladeer
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6 posted 03-21-2001 11:10 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Good to see you again, old what's-your-name
Paula Finn
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7 posted 03-22-2001 01:22 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

This is just splendiferous Parker...beautiful just wasnt a big enough word for the wonder of this
Parker
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... the old black rum


8 posted 03-22-2001 01:36 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

RMW, well thanky...

Janet, thanks, I can do wonders with my fingertips great back massage.. or type without looking.

ethome, thanks, that was very deep.

JLR, well thanks.

Sunshine, are you married.

Balladeer, thank you, memory still going I see.... its Parker... Parrrrrrker.

Paula, your too nice, thank you sweety.

Parker
SEA
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with you


9 posted 03-22-2001 09:23 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"in the darkness when I dream
are you there love...
are you there beneath the rain

your a shadow in my thoughts
i've touched you, though i have not
and my finger tips have loved you
each and every time"

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

By any name, you are still.....Hey handsome
This is SO romantic....my goodness, this set my heart all a fluttering Beautiful Parker SEA
Martie
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10 posted 03-22-2001 10:36 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I always knew you were Parker, even when you were someone else...wonderful poem!
Janet Marie
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11 posted 03-22-2001 01:03 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

ROFL ...
hey P-babes....
Back massage????
OH .. Is that what you "foreigners" call it hahaha
we got another name for it here under the Arch tee hee....
yer so cute when yer being a tease
later-magic fingers gator
Parker
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... the old black rum


12 posted 03-25-2001 12:57 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Sea, thank you very much sweety.

Martie, thanks I guess I am.

Janet, well thats what we callit but maybe not how to spell it.

Parker
dgvarner
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Posts 3621
High Springs, Florida


13 posted 05-08-2001 02:04 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

........how did i miss this one...

i like it..very much..  

and i must say..i identify with it..too much...  

very nicely written, love..
hugs, g

time makes us bolder..even children get older..and i'm gettin' older too...
-stevie nicks

Parker
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... the old black rum


14 posted 05-08-2001 02:13 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

dg, and I had thought that your eye's had examined every word of me... I guess there's still a few words you need to see.  

Parker
passing shadows
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displaced


15 posted 01-27-2003 12:06 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nice
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