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Open Poetry #12

Another Place

CountSin
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since 2001-03-02

Posts 6
Rochester, NY USA

0 posted 2001-03-21 02:58 AM

Another Place

In the lonesome season,
he loses his hope.
It isn't always black,
but he wishes it was.
When his dreams break
the eyelids that beat
his desires, everything
reverses. So?
Somenight he may cry,
but if the starlight
fingers his grief
he declares his certainty
and sleeps.
His eyelids beat
his desires.

dozens more poems by me are at: http://www.geocities.com/countsin/HTML/29_Poems_by_Jason_Paul_Fox.html

this poem is one of 38 at: http://www.geocities.com/countsin/HTML/ShortPoems.html

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2001-03-21 10:22 AM

Enjoyed your poem. I look forward to reading more of you here.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-03-21 10:34 AM

Welcome to Passions! A melancholy read, suits my mood today...

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2001-03-21 11:02 AM

Ah yes, this one gives me reason to think, and I really enjoy that! Appreciated the feelings here, and would like to say that I, too, will be looking for more from you!!!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-03-21 11:03 AM

welcome to passions

enjoy

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