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Red-uni
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0 posted 2001-03-21 12:14 PM



Please ignore my post that I have posted this one twice, I have not. I did all this posting to my post before I finished my first cup of morning coffee. I do not function well when first waking up.


A room lit softly with scented candles,
And the fireplace a blaze—as is her lips.
Two bodies tingle as eyes now meet,
As breath quickens, lips found tenderly.

His hands are gentle as he holds her,
The two bodies surrender to passion.
The shadows watch dancing about,
And the aroma of vanilla fills the room.

Many of their nights are such as this,
they have touched each other’s heart.
As years go by their love deepens,
opening more and more like a flower.

Together they share the good and the bad,
at night they cuddle and talk of dreams.
She met him first, and they were only friends.
Their friendship grew to love, and they wed.

Five children they raised, grandparents now and proud.
Their love still blossoms, in this journey of life,
as they look in each other’s eye seeing love.
Each content and smiling, as they bid goodnight.



[This message has been edited by Red-uni (edited 03-21-2001).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-03-21 06:19 AM


Very nice....James
Red-uni
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2 posted 2001-03-21 07:52 AM


Not sure what I have done. Apparently posted this one twice, with different name, and a slightly different version. Sorry.

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