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Possum
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since 2001-03-20
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0 posted 2001-03-20 11:32 PM


I just want to leave this mansion
Of terror and uncontrollable fright
To be held again and never see another pointless fight
Come hold my hand and say we are friends
That will manage to last through this horrible night
Don't push or pressure
Lets turn the music up real loud
And just hold each other
For the rest of this life

OR

We could quietly walk hand in hand
Out the front door of this mansion
And run as fast as we can
Until we hit the road sign that says
"WELCOME TO COMPLETE INSANITY ONCE AGAIN"

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with you
1 posted 2001-03-20 11:35 PM


"Don't push or pressure
Lets turn the music up real loud
And just hold each other
For the rest of this life"
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this is excellent writing, I like this very much SEA

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