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Open Poetry #12

- Woe's Song Senryu-

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-03-20 11:14 PM

Woe's Song Senryu
~*By Melissa Honeybee*~

Prisoner of woe
unending ache of love lost
all alone am I

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 03-20-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-20 11:17 PM

Melissa~ Hugs sweetie, this is so sad........my heart reaches out to you

SEA

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2001-03-20 11:21 PM

Short sad and true..
Nice..

~*Peachy Be*~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-03-20 11:46 PM

Here is a Canadian hug, bet you never had one of these - they are so "squishy" that you can hardly breathe, and filled with tons of love! Spread your wings, if it was meant to be it would be, if not - fly again you will find the right one, and it will be so good! Huge hugs to you.

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-03-21 03:18 PM

missy,

so sad is your tale of
woe, it will get better
for you, hun, I promise
hugz

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-03-21 03:39 PM

Melybee....don't make me cry....

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-03-21 04:35 PM

Melissa this is sad but I can't avoid reading the beauty into the grief, sorry, but thanks all the same....take care and chin up!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-03-21 05:13 PM

Such emotion, in so little words. Beautifully sad.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

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