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I'll Always Come To You
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I'll Always Come To You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“I’LL ALWAYS COME TO YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ A star shone in the darkness, and bathed you in it’s light, I stared at the brilliance, as you were engulfed, on this summer night… Quietly you stood there, with your elegance on display, your face pointing towards the heavens, looking like a flowering bouquet… Eyes the prettiest of blue, I wanted to know their intimacy, and silky hair of darkest brown, enhancing you so graciously… I came towards you in the light, and held your hand in mine, such a feeling I noticed, as our essence, started to combine… Once we touched as one, feeling warmth, so appealing, knowing about each other, with bodies that were agreeing… Caring, yearning, craving, together with all admiration, and loving gazes, many whispered words, of tender passion… I knew when we touched, that this was truly magic, for a star to shine down, showing you, so I would see all of your beauty, aglow with your loving virtue… I know that I will never again find another, of such charm and loviness, another I will not see, for “I’ll Always Come To You”… ~~~~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is enchanting dear BC  beautifully done! SEA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
makes me wish my eyes were blue..~Soft smiles~ Bill Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Bill, there are times where I'm just amazed by what you can do. . . this is one of them. . . superb my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very soft and gentle poetry, I loved it! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
*sigh* ohhhhh I do love how you write such soft and tender words...adding to my favorites....lovely Bill.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - thank you for your enchanting reply. nakdthoughts - a'hhhh, but mine are blue. Sven - thank you for your most gracious reply. It is appreciated. Mysteria - softness I write, gentle I be. Thank you Mysteria for your kind reply. Greeneyes - thank you for your most kind reply to this writing. I'm glad that you liked it, and I am honored to be added to your favorites. |
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