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SEA
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0 posted 2001-03-20 09:01 PM




I thought he was asleep
Until I felt his touch
Warm…………… inviting
Arousing me………..so much

Teasing…………tempting
Firey fingertips finding their way
Legs wrap 'round
Inviting gentle play

His voice husky
Asking if I'm awake
Responding in kiss
I whisper………. "just take" ………

And take he did
………..As did I………….
breathless and satiated
I heard his contented sigh

His lips seeking
And finding their mark
Quiet words of love ~
Hushed whispers in the dark

~SEA~

If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

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1 posted 2001-03-20 11:16 PM


Teasing…………tempting
Firey fingertips finding their way
Legs wrap 'round
Inviting gentle play

His voice husky
Asking if I'm awake
Responding in kiss
I whisper………. "just take" ………
======================

WHEW .. hey baby...thats quite a whisper ...
me thinks you been in me raspberry tea too
very nice girlie...sensual and soft...
Im digging that husky voice
great write Sea!!!!

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

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2 posted 2001-03-20 11:21 PM


thank you Janet, after a hard day of schooling, I thought I'd do something a little more grown up SEA
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3 posted 2001-03-20 11:22 PM


Grown up? Groan up? Whew....thanks for this....
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4 posted 2001-03-20 11:25 PM



Is it hot in here or what?! A most excellent write of quite the sensual night~

Take care,
Melissa~

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5 posted 2001-03-20 11:36 PM


Very Nice...me thinks me should go wake up my husband now.......Thanx for the inspiration.

Possum

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6 posted 2001-03-20 11:49 PM


Lovely, you set the mood beautifully. I reall enjoyed this one.
Jill
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7 posted 2001-03-21 07:56 AM


SEA - You brought a smile to me this morning with this one.

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8 posted 2001-03-21 08:26 AM


well this must have been wonderfully inspired...nice writing, very nice

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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9 posted 2001-03-21 10:03 AM


Wow SEA, this is not the usual style for you, I'm shocked *L*, but it works very, very nicely...
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10 posted 2001-03-21 11:25 AM


Sunshine~ yea......groan...(lol) definately

Melissa~ glad you liked thanks

Possum~ you are most welcome, thank you

Mysteria~ thank you

Jill~ and you one to me, thank you

Wynter~ oh yes, it was

PK~ you need to do some searching sweetie.....I have more like this.......all in open.... enjoy......(lol) no really, I do this from time to time..... I'm happy you liked this

~SEA

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11 posted 2001-03-21 12:31 PM


An intimate moment...loved the upbeat tempo, and sighing restfull ending...a classy sensual write. Thanks for sharing!

Jellybean King

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12 posted 2001-03-21 01:23 PM


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh love it

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 03-21-2001).]

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13 posted 2001-03-26 05:14 PM


I'm glad it's the end of the workday... *G* for the werk monster doesn't stand a chance of getting my mind back on track after reading this! LOL. Great job, SEA... I enjoyed! *S*
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14 posted 2001-03-27 09:08 AM


oh my.....what an inspiration you spread here, warm touch of love, did I said warm, kinda burning touch.... Love it Sea.

Charisma

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15 posted 2001-03-27 10:10 PM


Another sensual SEA,
Sending her readers sailing again.
Great job.
Thanks.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

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16 posted 2001-03-28 08:42 PM


Sea, I am glad I had a moment to stop by.  This was reallllly  nice and exiting writing.  *s*

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

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