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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-20 10:13 AM



I lay down,
between thoughts of yesterday
and that of tomorrow.
Today did not exist,
for I was blinded by desires,
my selfish wants
and I was paralyzed by my wounds
of self inflicted fear.

Sleep wouldn't come,
all that I could hear
was a beating of heart
sending out a distress signal,
with no one there to rescue me.

And when peacefulness came,
I had traveled to a distant state of mind
where no one I knew existed
and all was forgiven,
blame was not in the vocabulary,
nor fault nor pain...only happiness.

I awoke to the sound of crying,
coming from within.
I could hear the releasing of hurt.
I could see again the light of day.
I could move to the stroking of ego
telling me to be strong, rise, walk
but don't run to the nearest exit.

I flung open the door
passed through an opening
in that wall I had erected,
a fortress to protect me,
yet one that was holding
all the misfortunes,
locking them within me.

Four hours walking,
in brisk air
chilling the sweat of exertion
feeling alive again.
Stopping to speak to any and all
known and unknown,
real or imaginary,
persons or natures surroundings

life...

there was life after all
between my yesterday
and that of tomorrow.

~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-03-20 10:22 AM


It is SO good to see you writing of hope again! And healing comes as a surprise sometimes, like the sun breaking through the clouds! lovely, wynter!
Jellybean King
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 153
Jelly, Bean
2 posted 2001-03-20 10:24 AM


I loved the movement from the unreal dreamlike state to the real...walking in the brisk air...that played nicely with the underlying theme of inner awakening and self healing...I'm glad that this piece had a positive and hopeful ending. Thank you for sharing.

Jellybean King

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2001-03-20 04:26 PM


Wynter,
spring is coming both to the world and to your heart from the sounds of it. It's good to hear this poem of faith renewed.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2001-03-20 05:43 PM


I've been there between them.....
"And when peacefulness came,
I had traveled to a distant state of mind
where no one I knew existed
and all was forgiven,
blame was not in the vocabulary,
nor fault nor pain...only happiness.

I awoke to the sound of crying,
coming from within.
I could hear the releasing of hurt.
I could see again the light of day.
I could move to the stroking of ego
telling me to be strong, rise, walk
but don't run to the nearest exit.

I flung open the door
passed through an opening
in that wall I had erected,
a fortress to protect me,
yet one that was holding
all the misfortunes,
locking them within me.

Four hours walking,
in brisk air
chilling the sweat of exertion
feeling alive again.
Stopping to speak to any and all
known and unknown,
real or imaginary,
persons or natures surroundings

life...

there was life after all
between my yesterday
and that of tomorrow."

God you're a good writer!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-03-20 05:44 PM


This is a profound poem, you caught me and held me through the entire read. It certainly is a poem of faith and one of being an overcomer, which, by virtue or our womanly qualities.....we are!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
6 posted 2001-03-20 06:09 PM


Very inspirational and lovely!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2001-03-20 06:13 PM


Wonderful expression...James
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2001-03-20 08:29 PM


Wynter - it's nice to see the upbeat in your writing. I wish you the best, as always.

BC

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
9 posted 2001-03-21 10:26 AM


Serenity
thank you..it just happened to warm up here and the sun came out...so I too walked out a bit...thank you *s

Jelly
thank you also, I am trying to blend my dreams into the real..and they are slowly coming along *s

Kethry
spring showers are here..they will cleanse my soul for a few days then whatever happens shall make new memories huggzz and thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
10 posted 2001-03-21 10:32 AM


E
and you are aways so sweet to me thank you Eric...your support means a lot to me huggzzz

Kathleen
I hope I can overcome..all I can do is try and some days are definitely better than others

Walker
thank you

JamesMichael
thank you for reading ..always a pleasure when you stop by

Bill
have missed you, hope all is well *s huggzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
Posts 223

11 posted 2001-03-23 03:00 AM


I was pleased with the gentle inspirational parting.
nakdthoughts
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Posts 19200
Between the Lines
12 posted 2001-03-30 07:25 PM


thank you *s

~Wynter

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