Aanchal (Cloth having on shoulders....having eastern guls)

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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

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0 posted 2001-03-20 05:51 AM

It is in URDU but in braces there is brief translation.

Aanchal gira k guzray Kushbo bissa k guzray
(she droped her cloth from the shoulders and pass by me with a nice smell)
Mujay devana bana k wo zara sa muskura k guzray
(she made me her lover and pass by me with a smile)
Apnay andaz say kia mujj pay kuch aasa jado
(she made me her lover by her own style)
Aaena a dil toer k kudh nuzrann juka k guzray
(having eyes down she passed by me while breaking the mirror of my heart)
hay maray dil mann bi kantonn ki Hakomut
(i have a rule of neddles(having with flowers) over my heart)
Iss nazuk badan say kah doo k damann bacha k guzray
(say to that soft body that care herself whie passing me)
kia dushmanni thi hum say thundi hawa k jonkoo
(what u have qurrell with me oh cool breeze)
kio charaag maray dil k buja k guzray
(why u passes while blowing off the candlas of my heart)
Aaj hall unn ka bi hay dakhnay k kaabil Waseem
(today the her condition is also able to see waseem)
jo hum par bi Kabhi thay muskara kay guzray
(one day who had passed by me while smiling)

I love to nice poetry.

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

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Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

1 posted 2001-03-20 06:01 AM

How very nice. And the translation is a must have for me. I have a bad enough time with Francais.

And words are the story tellers. And mankind in any tongue will always listen to a story, of the joy or weeping of a heart. Indeed the three stories known to man, each contains that hope and despair.

Welcome aboard.

And of course my compliments

AT

"Be your own hero. Save your interior landscape. As in all mythos the blight can be defeated and the land turned back to freedom and fertility.

helen smith
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since 2001-03-12

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2 posted 2001-03-20 06:28 AM

I just loved the sight of her toying with you waseem and blowing out the candles of your heart

Marge Tindal

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3 posted 2001-03-20 07:34 AM

Waseem~
Welcome to Passions.
We will enjoy having you share your thoughts with us.

Look around - we've much to offer~
including our hands in friendship.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-03-20 08:36 AM

Waseem, Welcome to Passions! Thank you so very much for the translation. I think you are going to like it here, so sit back, relax, read, respond and write....we will enjoy every movement of your quill!

Check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
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5 posted 2001-03-20 10:56 AM

Welcome to the family Waseem! I look forward to reading more from you.

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