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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-03-19 05:55 PM


I awoke in the middle
Of the night
And walked around
And found everything dark
And still in the silence
I beheld black curtains
Over all the mirrors
Time had stopped
Frozen in time upon the clocks

And it was then

I realized,
I was dead

But the night was
Forever young

And resuscitated by this
I became filled
With all the memories
Of who I once was
And who I imagined
Myself to one day be
All the feelings of
Being alive
Once again I feed
And
Once again I feel
As long as this fire exists
I will have raison d’etre
As long as I do not forget

But only in the night

For only in the night,
Am I forever young


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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-03-19 05:58 PM


Ah...dark beauty....
PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA
2 posted 2001-03-19 05:59 PM


Is there any other?
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-03-19 06:26 PM


I awoke in the middle
Of the night
And walked around
And found everything dark
And still in the silence
I beheld black curtains
Over all the mirrors
Time had stopped
Frozen in time upon the clocks

And it was then

I realized,
I was dead

But the night was
Forever young

=================
As long as this fire exists
I will have raison d’etre
As long as I do not forget

But only in the night

For only in the night,
Am I forever young
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then all I can say is...hold on to the night...(and thy poets pen)
tis the light in the dark. *S*

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2001-03-21 11:47 PM


A very nice, and dark write...thanks for sharing!!

Nathan

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